I was in the forest, as I roamed through, I heard a little girl Scream! I walked further to see if she was ok. As I walked I heard a different noise, an old man crying. I was scared, but I had to see if they were ok. I kept walking on the dirty yellow path. As I walked it got darker and darker some more. The darker it got, the more scared I got. There were broken trees with hanging branches that looked like scary ghosts. The cold wind gave me goosebumps. As I searched for the old man and little girl, more eerie noises filled my ears. What I thought were ghosts were probably wolves howling.
Ducks quacked loudly in the distance as if alarmed by something big. I crept along, realizing that I was lost! I heard even more chilling noises! Oh no, what if it was a bear? I ran to the biggest tree to hide. As I climbed, I could see a pond at the end of the path. Next to it, sat the old man and a little girl crying. I went to see if they were Ok. I thought, if I can't help them, maybe they can help me! The end.
Kia Ora, my name is Maia and I am in Room 24, at Owairaka District School.
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Hello Kezi! Its your Poppy here and that story you wrote made me get goosebumps! It gave me the chills when you said that you heard wolves howling. Do you think there might be a part two? Keep up the good work.
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