Hello Bloggers it is me Kezia here and today I finished my owai news. It was so much fun, It only took me about 15 min because I did not stop. Have you ever made a news letter? If you haven't then you should because I had a lot of fun doing It!
Kia ora Kezia. Thanks for sharing your news story. Great work using the template to make it look like a real newspaper article. I'm not sure the headline matches the article though? It would be great if there was a bit more detail in your article about what would happen if Rangitoto erupted. I know you have had a busy few days so thanks for making the effort to get all your work finished.
Kia ora Kezia, thank you for sharing your work with us. Do you think being a news reporter would be a challenging job? Writing tip: Rangitoto needs a capital 'R' as it is the name of the island. Proper nouns include the specific names of people, places, and things - these all have capital letters. Kia pai tō rā. (Have a good day.)
Kia ora Kezia. Thanks for sharing your news story. Great work using the template to make it look like a real newspaper article. I'm not sure the headline matches the article though? It would be great if there was a bit more detail in your article about what would happen if Rangitoto erupted. I know you have had a busy few days so thanks for making the effort to get all your work finished.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Kezia, thank you for sharing your work with us. Do you think being a news reporter would be a challenging job?
ReplyDeleteWriting tip: Rangitoto needs a capital 'R' as it is the name of the island. Proper nouns include the specific names of people, places, and things - these all have capital letters.
Kia pai tō rā. (Have a good day.)
Nice job, Kezia. If Rangitoto did ever erupt again, could you guarantee that it wouldn't reach the mainland. I'm sure it would still affect Auckland.
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