Tuesday, 19 October 2021

An Unexpected Visitor

 An Unexpected Visitor


Part One

Living in the mushroom house


I live in a little mushroom house with one door and a window on it. I have lived in the little house for 50 years. I love living in this little village because all of the neighbors are so nice, once Tom (my neighbor) gave me a pancake for breakfast (it was amazing). Every day it is the same, go to the supermarket and get some food then go to Tom’s house and give him his food. It is always the same. A week went past and as that week went past it got colder and colder until an unexpected visitor came... 


Part two

The an unexpected visitor came


I was so scared that I closed the door and dashed to my bedroom and hid under the old bed. I waited for a little bit and heard nothing so I quietly got out from under the old bed and walked to the door and opened the door and saw...  A big furry dog, I gasped and took a step back. “Hello can I help you” “yes” the dog said I was surprised I didn't think the dog would speck. “ I was wondering if you wanted to come to the big game” “ what big game? And who are you” “it is me Tom” I laughed and said “ I thought you were a monster” “ and I forgot all about the game” “ I will get ready” 


 

Part three

The big game 


I was on my way to big game with Tom when it started to rain and rain. We had to turn back because it was too heavy. I was sad that we had to go back home but when we got home Tom made me a hot chocolate with mushrooms in it. I said ” thank you Tom I love it” and Tom went back to his mushroom house. The End


1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Kezia. Thanks for sharing your Doorway 1 story. You definitely have a strong sense of personal voice in your writing and you have mastered the use of speech marks! It would be helpful for your blog visitors if you included the door picture that prompted this writing. Keep up the fantastic work.

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