You think you've seen some unusual houses in your time......Well, this is a house that will blow you away!
There was a rocky house on a cute little snail. The snail had strips on it's slippery back. The snail was little and twisty. It floated in space like a rock. There were lots of big and little stars, some of the stars moved at great speed and some moved slow. At midnight the snail got extremely bored so he decided to go exploring in space. He was hoping there would be another snail to play with. The snail got excited thinking about it. In the distance the snail saw a snail shape so he floated to it. He realised that it was a snail. He said to the snail " do you want to be my friend and play with me? The snail replied " ok I would love to be your friend and play". They flew higher and higher side by side until they saw the Titan Moon, it was bright and orange. They were both extremely happy to have found each other. They turned towards earth and started to head back home.
Kia ora Kezia,
ReplyDeleteGreat start intriguing the readers into your story and I think it goes well with the picture you have created. Next time it would be great if you could use some more interesting sentence starters, like an adverb or a simile.
Keep up the great blogging!
NJ