The old man stood on the snow with goosebumps on his arms and legs because it was so really cold. He wore an old and thin coat with rips on it . He wanted to climb a giant cliff. The old man wanted to climb the cliff because he saw something in the distance so he wanted to find out what it was. he said to himself 'what if it was a ship that could save me?' he started to get excited. But he was also worried 'what if it was a ship and he would not get up on the cliff in time?' So the old man just started to climb up the cliff. It was hard but he got up there in time. He was so happy that he made it! But realised that it was a ship so he walked closer to it but as he walked closer he saw that it was not moving and that there were no people on it.
Kia ora Kezia!
ReplyDeleteKa pai posting this writing onto your blog. I really like the picture you have created, as it sets the scene as you read the story. I am definitely intrigued with where you story is going, so it would be great if you wanted to keep going. You have created great suspense and I want to read more.
Keep up the great blogging!
NJ
Hello NJ it is me Kezia here and I am so HAPPY that you liked my post on the lost ship. I loved making it on my warm bed.
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Hi Kezia
ReplyDeleteI agree with NJ, I would love to read what happens next and find out why the ocean was no longer there. Good job Kezia, keep up the great work at home.