Their mission to Mars had been a success so far. A month ago, their shuttle had landed on the surface of the red planet and the crew had immediately set to work.The astronaut was a man and he wore a warm and uncomfortable suit. The suit was very big and had a tank on the back of it. The astronaut was walking on the amazing Mars with his friends. He felt scared but he had his friends to keep him safe. It was hard to eat food but they manged to eat some food. But one day one of the astronauts said that there tank was running out of oxygen. All of the friends started to pack up all of the equipment they brought with them. After 2 minutes they were in the rocket ready to lift of. They heard the speaker talk and it was saying 10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1 blast off.
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Hello Mrs Haines it is me Kezia. And thank you for commenting on my post about mission to Mars. I had a great time making it. You are the first person to comment on it.
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